Cycling is believed to be the most effective solution to reach a destination. From my viewpoint, riding a bicycle has some benefits and drawbacks that need discussing.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that cycling brings noticeable advantages. It is believed that the more people use a bicycle, the less polluted our mother nature becomes. Admittedly by using a bike, many pollutants and gas or dust which are emitted from transports having a moto engine can be sharply reduced. This could contribute to the fall in air pollution, the greenhouse effect and global warming. Moreover, cycling can allow us to save a certain amount of money that people purchase fuel and petroleum for their cars and motorbikes. Additionally, the cost that individuals should spend to afford a bicycle is definitely cheaper than the price of a car.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages that bicycles cause that should not be avoided. First and foremost, riding a bike takes a longer time to get to places. To utilise this type of transport, people require physical energy by using their feet to move the pedal and if they are in a rush, driving a car would be more convenient than riding a bicycle. In addition, nowadays, our planet witnesses an increase in the average temperature, which has caused global warming and extreme heat in the summer around the world. As a result, people cycling in this type of weather run a higher risk of being prone to a heat stroke that leads to detrimental effects on their health, especially children and elderly people.
In conclusion, I would argue that although cycling could be a good way to reach a destination due to the environmentally friendly function and the reasonable price, it could also cause problems related to health and time saving; therefore people should use this transport on a suitable occasion.
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 76
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 67
- The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 56
- Some psychologists recommended that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time in a day Do you agree or disagree 67
- Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle these days 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79116248501 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3420944892 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176379048957 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589202701777 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438411146061 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106127911594 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252924871345 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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