Cycling is believed to be the most effective solution to reach a destination. From my viewpoint, riding a bicycle has some benefits and drawbacks that need discussing.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that cycling brings noticeable advantages. It is believed that the more people use a bicycle, the less polluted our mother nature becomes. Admittedly by using a bike, many pollutants and gas or dust which are emitted from transports having a moto engine can be sharply reduced. This could contribute to the fall in air pollution, the greenhouse effect and global warming. Moreover, cycling can allow us to save a certain amount of money that people purchase fuel and petroleum for their cars and motorbikes. Additionally, the cost that individuals should spend to afford a bicycle is definitely cheaper than the price of a car.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages that bicycles cause that should not be avoided. First and foremost, riding a bike takes a longer time to get to places. To utilise this type of transport, people require physical energy by using their feet to move the pedal and if they are in a rush, driving a car would be more convenient than riding a bicycle. In addition, nowadays, our planet witnesses an increase in the average temperature, which has caused global warming and extreme heat in the summer around the world. As a result, people cycling in this type of weather run a higher risk of being prone to a heat stroke that leads to detrimental effects on their health, especially children and elderly people.
In conclusion, I would argue that although cycling could be a good way to reach a destination due to the environmentally friendly function and the reasonable price, it could also cause problems related to health and time saving; therefore people should use this transport on a suitable occasion.
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 76
- The table blow gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 78
- Some psychologists recommended that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time in a day Do you agree or disagree 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are good at or that they find the most interest Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79116248501 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3420944892 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176379048957 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589202701777 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438411146061 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106127911594 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252924871345 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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