The three drawings illustrate the number of changes which has taken place in the region during a 63-year time period.
Overall, it is noteworthy that Meadowside village has increased in size to become Meadowside suburbs merging with Fonton. Additionally, the most noticeable alteration is the construction of a residential area in 1985 and a business park in the present time.
Meadowside village, which had a road running through from the west, was expanded in 1985 with the appearance of the housing estate in the west, a leisure centre and a superstore in the south-west. Similarly, Fonton having a railway line going through from the east was extended to the south of the map. Moreover, the road was converted into the main road which was expanded to the east while the railway line remained unchanged.
Turning to the present time, Meadowside suburbs, which was then a village back in 1985, and Fonton have continued to be extended and merged. In a similar fashion, housing estate appeared to increase in size. Conversely the leisure complex, superstore and roads have remained unchanged over 36 years. Additionally, it can be seen that a station which has had a new railway line connected to the old one has been constructed in the centre of suburbs, together with the erection of the business park to the south and a hotel to the north-east.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve continued to be extended and merged. In a similar fashion, housing estate appeared to increase in...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Conversely,
...ng estate appeared to increase in size. Conversely the leisure complex, superstore and roa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, moreover, similarly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99118942731 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78041628954 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502202643172 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9253586319 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151681048681 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651693600902 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549028829356 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102852721093 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395171342387 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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