Many people work for long hours, leaving little time for leisure activities
Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?
A lot of people spend too much time working, so they rarely leave time for leisure activities. Although this is somewhat paying off with advancement in career, which is often cherished as a vast achievement, there are serious untold risks threatening to negate the benefit.
Admittedly, it is advantageous for individuals who work long duration as they often obtain greater height at work. Indeed, as people devote a large part of their time to work and practice relentlessly, they tend to adapt to the procedure of the occupation better, so much that they sometimes become perfect. This means that they oftentimes carry out difficult tasks more efficiently than their colleagues when it matters the most, which makes them more useful. As a result, such people are usually noticed and, consequently, appreciated by being promoted ahead of others.
Despite this minor upside, I believe prolonged working hours and reduced leisure time could be disadvantageous in some ways. Firstly, it may lead to an unfavorable health condition as the body system tend to be overworked. One such case was reported by scientists in the US, where many people suffered from brain paralysis because they work too much and do not create time to have fun. My point is that leisure activities help to refresh our memory -- and that hardly would there be sound health if it is not given more time. Secondly devoting much time to work and less to leisure activities could make people slightly detached from loved ones. In other words, in many cases, free-time activities are mostly done with family and friends, and it strengthens the bond among them, but this is unlikely to happen since many individuals work more. Emotions, therefore, would fade as they incautiously drift apart.
In conclusion, it is clear that working for long is beneficial, but major downsides such as illness and detachment are more. On the basis of this, the disadvantages are more than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in many cases, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73683648897 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616099071207 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5983164625 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363219170691 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112741858891 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742106017131 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217540018793 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326490365577 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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