In this burgeoning era , where being workaholic is a priority not ones physical or mental health. As many people believes that giving equal time to rejuvenating activities are important too with being so much into hectic schedules. as i agree to the statement that an individual should involve himself or herself into one or the other activity to break the monotony of work life.
The extended working hours are varied from one person to another , even in some cases from on e company to another. Unfortunately due to increase in the working hours we are giving less time to the people who are connected with us . not only that we also harm our own body through working for longer hours without any approach towards having any activity which can provide peace to ones soul and mind.
Furthermore , few people also believes that giving so much strain to your body can be a good cause to hazardous diseases like hypertension , heart diseases and weakening of your eyesight. In addition to this working for longer hours can also effect individuals eating habits which is a matter of concern too.
certainly i agree that working or earning is not the only priority to be sustainable in life food and relaxing activities must be given equal importance as rejuvenation is an integral part of everyone's life as with no food one would not be giving justification to work done as it would non productive accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, if, so, in addition, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85892116183 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69636018595 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589211618257 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8375011074 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.111111111 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108323377598 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514113846377 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029015739056 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670790330482 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212628091018 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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