Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
With the advancement in industrialisation, fundamentals and dynamics of corporate culture have been altered significantly. In recent time, the culture of working beyond the duty hours is becoming increasingly popular. Where extended duty hours increase the productivity and chances of promotions, on the contrary, it outweighs the advantages by exposing professionals to mental health and personal relationship issues.
The advantages of working extended hours are twofold. Firstly, it increases the productivity of individuals. To clarify, longer working hours enable professional to work more, which increase their productivity. For instance, a construction project can be completed before time if the engineers and other staff members go beyond the required working hours and add more time to pace up the project. Secondly, this increased productivity enables working people to get promotions quickly, which accelerates the achievement of their professional and financial goals.
However, there are downsides to this as well. To begin with, extended office hours leave no time for the professionals; hence, the chances of depression increase exponentially. Humans’ brain has certain limitations, and to remain functional, it needs appropriate time to relax and enjoy. For instance, a report published by employees right, people with less or no leisure time are mainly exposed to the risk of mental issues. Additionally, long working hours, coupled with mental health issues, struggle with personal relationships as well. This notion is further aided by the fact that a large number of professionals are either single or divorced due to non-availability of time for their relationships.
To conclude, long sittings in office, though, brighten-up the chances of promotions due to increased productivity; however, the disadvantages in form of mental health and relationship issues associated with this outweights the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 593, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...otion is further aided by the fact that a large number of professionals are either single or divo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88692579505 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38316664223 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8423212311 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.066666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236086191378 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763719402605 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396120152354 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127213271988 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583631894892 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.