In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?
In several competitive sports, large number of Olympians prefer to use prohibited drugs in order to perform better. This essay will discuss that the desire to gain popularity and a way to reduce stress are the main causes of this trend. The most favourable solutions for this phenomenon are regular medical checkups and stringent laws.
One of the main causes of taking banned substances is that it helps sports individuals to reduce peer pressure. When there is a high competition in the field of sports, many players often loose their motivation and this would certainly impact their overall game performance. Therefore, they tend to take high doses of heroine and cocaine in order to boost their confidence. Another main reasons why sportspersons use illicit drugs is because their primary goal is become famous among audience. As medicinal drugs intake allows players to improve their muscle strength and endurance, they are more inclined towards these unlegitimate techniques to showcase their talent. For example, Adrenaline is a medical drug, which is banned in competitive sports events in India because it increases the physical strength of player up to ten folds.
The most viable solution to avoid the usage of performance enhancement drugs is that there should be frequent medical examinations before commencement of any competition. In other words, several detection methods such as breathe exhalation or blood test should be tested before permitting participation of players. Moreover, it is the prime responsibility of sports authorities to introduce strict anti-doping laws. That is to say, if any sportsperson found be doped in sports, they should be punished by the statutory bodies. For instance, a similar initiative was taken in Australia and a doped sportsmen was sentenced for 5 years, and this has reduced the usage of illegal substances to a great extent.
In conclusion, the possible causes of taking unlawful medicines in sports are the ambition to be in the limelight and to shed excessive stress, and it is the duty of government to conduct drug diagnostic tests and punish active dopers in order to avoid such circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...the field of sports, many players often loose their motivation and this would certain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, that is to say, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89352607967 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0227596765 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180178416183 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560859073128 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367692435965 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966892474072 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471055341206 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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