Many sports players advertised on sports products. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Every new product needs advertisement in order to provide awareness to people. Some sports players advertised in sports products for publicity, no doubt it has some advantages and some disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the picture before provide a concrete decision related to the advantages and disadvantages of sports players advertised in sports products.
Starting with advantages, it is very clear that a person who is using product is more familiar than any other person. In a similar way, a sportsman can understand and deliver the benefits and features of products in a more convenient way than any other person. For example, Umer Gul, a fast bowler of Pakistan can easily understand new features of a new Cricket bowl and once he understands, he will deliver features of the bowl (easily swing, cant not damaged by other players, good for fast bowling etc) more efficiently than a model or any other person. Another example is for Cricket bat, a batsman can easily deliver its good points as compared to others. Another advantage for appointing sportsman for advertisement is human psychology, sports celebrities attract their followers more than any other person belongs to other professions.
Now, comes to drawbacks of sports players advertised in sports products, the biggest drawback is that sportsman focused more on advertisement instead of their daily practice the reason behind that problem is a huge amount of money that pay for advertisement. Another disadvantage could be that a sportsman may not advertise like a professional model.
To sum up in the light of the above discussion it can be concluded that advantages of sports players advertised in sports products outweigh disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "In a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...is more familiar than any other person. In a similar way, a sportsman can understand and deliver...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...iver features of the bowl easily swing, cant not damaged by other players, good for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, for example, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25448028674 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99542951648 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519713261649 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1296228194 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.272727273 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288395754779 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132340707737 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135008757789 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249298700568 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130069640858 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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