Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, a great deal of teenagers have sought more opportunities to gain work experiences. While some people believe those activities are worthless especially before starting the first academic years, the others consider them as enriching experiences. As I strictly agree with the latter view, I will analyze my point with examples.
First of all, this trend helps youngsters intellectually approach to new study techniques and fundamental skills, such as interpersonal skills or practical one. This time break may broaden each individual’s horizons with greater adaptability, thereby increasing their self-confidence and understanding. In reality, young people will easily access to incredible new outlooks and customs by studying abroad. Then, their knowledges will significantly contribute to the public well-being.
What is more, taking a gap year might create chances for adolescents to explore possible career options. Normally, high-school graduates are not well-prepared with any vocational training. However, with the numerous sources of information before university, they soon take actions to select their future areas of work. A recent survey showed two-thirds of employers deeply search for graduates with pertinent work experiences. Therefore, most youngsters constantly prefer delaying tertiary education for one year to hone more necessary skills.
To summarize, i truly think that this period comes with enormous benefits. In a few words, it generally promotes youngster’s self- discovery, pave the way for their upcoming business and boost the economic growth of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efore starting the first academic years, the others consider them as enriching ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, such as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94396551724 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13480032817 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3028927022 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119614561996 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382295613547 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024748857744 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643954538748 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291866031466 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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