Nowadays the advent of technology has revolutionized all bearings of life from production to transportation or media... Everything has become automated under the buttons. This has largely dispensed with the need for manually working especially housework that is no longer a big obsession for many people after a long busy day from workplace to come back their homes.
This essay will prove that the merits of this advancement outweigh its drawbacks.
It is common knowledge that machines in daily work, play a greater role which is undeniable on human life.
First and foremost, it's very time-saving and convenient, instead of taking a lot of time and effort to do housework we can utilize them in other imprative tasks.
For instance, by using electronic devices such as: washing machine, vacuum cleaner, and dishwasher at home, women tend to save their precious time which they can spend with family, in particular, the focused upbringing of offspring. Individuals can complete work in less time and more efficiently, workloads are also dramatically reduced as well as spending time to rejuvenate themselves. Accordingly, the quality of work is improved with a high precision. For example, because machines work more accurately than humans, the home equipment like the screwdriver, mixer grinder, juice maker does the work more accurately. Nonetheless, a tremendous demerit of using machines for house tasks is that the development of labor saving devices has 'contributed' quite a lot to ... obesity, especially among housewives. According to research by the University of Manchester and Royal Holloway University showed that the average female now spends almost 20 percent less time on chores than her counterpart in the early 1980s. And advances in technology with labor-saving appliances such as microwave ovens, dishwashers have helped women work less, and the implications are that their growing waistlines are growing. Consequently, this arises different health issues like obesity, heart and muscular pains among people who rely on machines.
To sum up, everything is like a hand has two sides similarly machines have both good and bad sides. Most importantly of all, we need an essential balance of using machines at home to make life comfortable and convenient but not at the cost of health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, nonetheless, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33516483516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94219789092 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2063212136 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.235294118 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103743584965 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286483357143 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252152615614 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440247876066 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283721994698 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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