Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
In modern world, various machines has been created by humans to make life easier for themselves. Among those, different machines are built to do home chores. I believe that this development has not only helped in reducing time required to finish work but also increase the efficiency and precision of work.
On one hand, firstly, the main advantage of using machines for work is that it saves time. As washing clothes before used to take four to five hours and similar time for drying them but now with the washing machines it can be done within two hours. Also, it saves the consumption of water and the waste water can be reused for other purposes. In addition to this, by using machines such as drill machine, a hole can easily be made to fix pictures, without damaging the wall or paint job. So, machines are not only helping us to save time but also environment.
On the other hand, people are becoming lazy and it is effecting there health. As, the life has become busy and less physical activity has arises the health problems, most notably, obesity. People are using machines at home that require minimal physical strength. For example, for cleaning house, now a days we are using cleaning machines rather than using broomsticks that require more body exercise. Furthermore, people are totally dependent on machine. For example, when my washing machine broke, I waited for a week to get it repaired rather than washing them by hand. Therefore, people are becoming machine dependent on the cost of their health.
In conclusion, although, by using machines for house chores not only make us lazy but also minor affected our health, therefore, I believe that using machines is more beneficial to mankind than to avoid it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ength. For example, for cleaning house, now a days we are using cleaning machines rather t...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...h. For example, for cleaning house, now a days we are using cleaning machines rather t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86486486486 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43209457113 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5609109858 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171459803392 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547674725626 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467363955865 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981276262255 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464740374698 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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