Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
Although a lot of tertiary institution students reside with their family members while studying, others live in places distant from home due to the difference in location of school. Students can benefit from both situations but there are also some drawbacks to be taken into account.
One obvious advantage of university students who are living with family is that it eliminates the cost of accommodation as the student would not need to pay extra fees on house rent. This is considered beneficial because only in such situations can the already high cost of education be cut down.
However, residing with family while being a student can be detrimental. In a bid for such students to play their role as family members, they are obligated to participate in most of the home chores, such as cleaning and leisure activities, which consume much of study time. Rarely would such students be able to face their studies
As well as staying with family members, living away from parents also has its benefit. Students who live alone tend to enjoy more freedom as most decisions would be taken solely. For example, one can keep late night without the need to ask for permission from fathers and mothers.
Despite this upside, students who stay in their own apartment may lack emotional support when it is most needed. While studying in university, academic assessments can be stressful so the physical presence of loved ones, which usually relieves stress, might be important in such situation. So, if students do not have access to their family, they may breakdown mentally, owing to stress
In conclusion, whether a university student chooses to stay with family or not depends largely on the location of the school. Both choices are advantageous and disadvantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11301369863 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67977865547 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3545039404 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313987979546 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113673444617 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735007334119 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168411232266 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667747171003 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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