Modern buildings change the character and appearance of towns and cities. The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree
At present, there is a drastic change in the field of architecture and modernization which has discover the new modern cities and world. This change has put some major impacts on our lifestyle by making it easier and more comfortable rather than past. Instead of such things, some people think that government should encourage new architecture to make new buildings in old and traditional styles which is irrelevant in my opinion. I will discuss my opinions and give supporting views in further paragraphs.
At start, first and foremost benefit of having modern building is that it has made our lifestyle more advanced and secure. For example, due to new architecture, buildings are more energy efficient and stronger as it is made of concrete, steel and iron instead of using bricks and wood like ancient times. Most importantly, modern building changes the whole scenario of cities and towns by making its more Beautifull and luxurious which attracts more tourist and workers from other cities and it indirectly boost up the economic growth.
Secondly, such buildings need less space to build but still provide more space in the form of flats and apartments where people can work or live. For instance, as population is increasing and to meet their land needs tall building are the relevant source instead of clearing more lands by cutting trees or by clearing farmlands so it will also help to control climate change in the long run.
At final, I can conclude that government should encourage new architecture and they should not stop it in the name of preserving cultural or traditional values. They can spend huge amount of money to repair old and traditional buildings to conserve cultural identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'discovered'.
Suggestion: discovered
...rchitecture and modernization which has discover the new modern cities and world. This c...
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Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...ers from other cities and it indirectly boost up the economic growth. Secondly, such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06713780919 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6920322566 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5173398129 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26415396182 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991292536662 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576315931982 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156241372241 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381697476351 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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