More and more adult are playing computer games . Why is this happening and is it a positive or negative development
There is a current trend that involves adult playing with computer games , This might be caused by recent technological advancement in building sophisticated games which now appeals to mature minds and the effect of this depends on many factors.
To start with , there are more Sophisticated games which helps helps adult mind get creative whilst still having fun , before now, most video games were too simplistic and only interesting to kids , for instance there are video games that helps in problem solving skills which principle can even be applied in everyday life and work
However, there are still a lot of worthless and time wasting games which aren’t advisable to spend time on and can greatly impact one’s lifestyle by reducing efficiency and enhancing a sedentary lifestyle
It becomes imperative to be able to know what games to watch as an adult so as not to waste time on frivolities and also to be able to learn while having fun playing those games
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9754601227 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58767174033 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 241.0 49.4020404114 488% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 405.5 106.682146367 380% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.5 20.7667163134 392% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 7.06120827912 453% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206881811725 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173375166647 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290829805771 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115891822024 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621340621613 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.8 13.0946893788 327% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.74 50.2224549098 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 11.3001002004 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.53 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.