Fashion industry have gained a lot of attention recently. Many people considers that it is important to wear more fashion oriented clothes. I believe, such attitude negatively influences the society especially the young generation, as these fashion clothes are quiet expensive and not everyone can afford to buy them.
Nowadays clothes have become more of a fashion status for a person rather than a necessity. Wearing a branded clothes reflects an individual's financial status, and people who wear a non brand outfits, feels dejected in the society. This trend has resulted due to an increase in the advertisement of a popular brands by a famous celebrity. As, many teenagers and young adults look up to the movie star of a sports person, they try to follow them regardless of their financial capabilities to buy such costly garments. A survey conducted by Vogue India, stated that a majority of newly launched brands started making big profits after doing celebrity endorsements.
This increasing trend of buying such expensive clothes in affecting the budget of people in the middle class category. As these young people have the mentality of showing off their materialistic items to their peers, it becomes difficult for most of the other individuals to afford such costly items. Due to which the youngsters belonging to the family with an average income feels left out in front of their friends. Such situation creates wrong needs to buy such products and it creates financial crisis for their parents.
In conclusion, showing off of a materialistic products is a never ending trend, and it will create difficulty with budget management among the middle class people. I totally believe, such trend have a bad influence on young minds. In order to avoid such situation, parents will have to instill their kids to differentiate between things that are necessary and those that are luxury.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean '(clothes)'?
Suggestion: (clothes)
...her than a necessity. Wearing a branded clothes reflects an individuals financial statu...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ity. Wearing a branded clothes reflects an individuals financial status, and people who wear a...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
... advertisement of a popular brands by a famous celebrity. As, many teenagers and young adults lo...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...g adults look up to the movie star of a sports person, they try to follow them regardl...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...clusion, showing off of a materialistic products is a never ending trend, and it will cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16504854369 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75365928866 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4199047296 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219645254025 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787109385235 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102082091587 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143627347557 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117835201718 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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