More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes.
Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?
Buying fashion clothes are high in demand now a days all over globe. Most of the people think that wearing fashion attire is important and the graph is going high day by day. People have been moving towards fashion clothes generating revenue which is a positive trend.
It is irrefutable fact that fashion design industry is in limelight. Due to increase in socialising with parties and meetings, individuals always looking to show their individuality and uniqueness by wearing the new fashion attire. Furthermore, increased economic status also allowing them to afford even if they are in high price. besides to it, highly creative employees in industry coming up with new models which are attracting loads of customers. Recent survey published by survey money sated that, 75% of people only looking for high fashion attire even if the prices are in raise. Affordability and wants are the big motivators which increase the economy of the counties who produces fashion clothes.
People want to dress up like their admirers which is also contributing to high demand to this trend. Social media, sports and cinema icons are big influences of fashion, for example, people who admire Virat Kohli would like to dress up like him and buying the brands he endorse, which is again generating lot of revenue to companies who is finding their targeted customers. Technical advancements allowing to create lot of trending designs for industries to attract more customers. Social media and online applications are high contributors for this trend and generating revenue which is not predicted before.
To recapitulate, high usability of wearing fashion clothes is good revenue generator which is helping production houses as well as it is influencing countries economy. In my opinion people wanting more fashion clothes is a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ying fashion clothes are high in demand now a days all over globe. Most of the people thin...
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Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... fashion clothes are high in demand now a days all over globe. Most of the people thin...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... afford even if they are in high price. besides to it, highly creative employees in ind...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'endorses'.
Suggestion: endorses
...ss up like him and buying the brands he endorse, which is again generating lot of reven...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: creating
...tomers. Technical advancements allowing to create lot of trending designs for industries ...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hion clothes is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25850340136 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74560385094 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4245103387 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.066666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270520651817 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988061986105 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083232610454 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193714620778 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984907506665 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.