These days, the popularity of fashion among the public is increasing. In my opinion, this is primarily a positive trend considering its effect on people and the society.
Firstly, the prevalence of fashionable clothes benefits people because it is a movement towards freedom of expression. Though technically everyone is free to choose what he wears, there are factors like conventions or peer pressure that limit his decisions. Fashion, however, encourages people to be proud of expressing their ideas, however different those are, freeing them from various constraints. The latest fade in women’s clothes, for example, is to be gender neutral, so that females can show others that they can be as professional and efficient as their male counterparts, and they refuse to be objectified, without having to worry about being isolated from the mainstream.
Secondly, this trend also exerts a positive influence on the society. Not only does the multi-billion dollar fashion industry create millions of jobs, but it also contributes money directly to the society, which can be used on projects like social welfare, medical care and education. The fashion retailer, ZARA, for instance, employs over 100,000 workers, not including those who are hired by firms to which it outsources parts of its business, and spends billions of dollars on taxes, donations and investments. As a result, people’s expanding interest in fashion help the economy to grow.
In conclusion, I believe that people’s increasing fascination with fashionable clothes is largely a good development. It is both a movement towards freedom of expression for people and a boost to economy for the society.
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I just came to say that I got a 7.5 in writing a week after I posted this article. I did not get the same topic during the exam, but my skills are the same.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44486692015 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03005326721 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638783269962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7729153139 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1645920778 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681605473457 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435819528304 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108653003928 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317770215019 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.