Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
A lot of people agree that happiness cannot be related with money. Definition to happiness is very difficult as different people will have different meaning of happiness to them and the most effective way to be happy is to accept current circumstances and the blessings one have.
Defining happiness is almost impossible as its a state of mind. Every human being on this earth is unique from one another which means their meaning of happiness is also different. Similarly, their lives are constantly changing with time and consequences which plays a significant role in making it hard to define the point of happiness. For instance, poor people would be happy to eat anything for the meals but people with money would normally be happy when their meals are of their own choice. Hence, happiness is hard to be defined as it varies on several reasons.
Achievement of happiness can be possible by being satisfied by everything present at the moment. In other words, realizing the things already achieved and appreciating the small blessings, would be a best start of finding happiness. In current situation, mostly people are in a continuous race of obtaining something better and bigger and due to that they do not stop and appreciates things they already have. It can be illustrated by the example of developed countries where life is so busy that people forgot to actually live their life instead they are busy in being something better.
To conclude, it is hard to sum up happiness into words as its consistently changes with the change in surroundings. As happiness is a sense of feeling, it can be possible by living in the moment and realizing the positivity and avoiding the negativity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ining happiness is almost impossible as its a state of mind. Every human being on t...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...reciating the small blessings, would be a best start of finding happiness. In cur...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...f feeling, it can be possible by living in the moment and realizing the positivity and avoidi...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positivity and avoiding the negativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, for instance, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95804195804 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79462293617 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8930352659 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470722024122 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170686262705 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105791745206 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278657826645 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104375004816 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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