News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in
newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become
used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
News have been directed by many editors in order to match their certain criteria. Thus, editors have the main leverage on what kind of news should be published through their platforms. Undoubtedly, there are some factors which'er playing a crucial role in determining what content should be broadcasted. Seemingly, the most offensive and bad news have the highest followers and considered as the most lucrative news for a plethora of greedy press agencies. This essay aims to explore in further detail the factors that determine the type of news as well as it discusses the current situation of news reports before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it's irrefutable that there are lots of factors standing behind publishing particular news. First of all, the nature of their nations. there is no doubt that various countries have imposed strict rules and regulations on exporting any news. For instance, most of the Arab nations, have a unilateral political view which not allowed anybody to criticize them. Therefore, their news are not reliable. Second of all, specific news might need more evidence to be released via some agencies. BBC news as an example considered one of the reliable channel that the majority of their news are accurate due to the high effort in collecting information by various source to ensure high credibility.
Unfortunately, offensive and bad news on some celebrities will sound very well on regular people. Thus, such agencies resort to release some scandals and rumors on them to acquire more followers. Moreover, this might impact on the general opinion about those famous people.
To sum up, there are plenty of factor that play pivotal role in releasing specific news for normal people. However, most of it has poor content . In my point of view news should not be good as it must be precise and with no influence by anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, kind of, no doubt, as well as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04193548387 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62922252294 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1889122992 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291981513458 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891515143533 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596878813498 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171240710791 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768800654367 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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