Most people tend to move from developing nations to developed nations to attain higher standards of living such as work culture, hospitality and wealth, immigration for work has a negative effect on children are thought by many people and others disagree. In my opinion, the transfer of family from one country to other countries for the work purpose has more drawbacks as compared to benefits, in details are discussed in the following paragraphs
Looking at the advantage of shifting the family from one country to other, provide the oppurtunity to the people to explore different cultures and live a luxurious life with different ethnicity. Take an example mostly skilled people from developing countries are in demand by the developed countries, most people from Asian countries travel to western countries for the work purpose and learn the western culture and lifestyle and on return to the homeland, they try to build the same lifestyle equipped with modern technology.
On the other hand, the family balance of these families are always in a disturbed state, mainly the education and bringing up of children is mostly affected. Knowledge of rituals and traditional cultures is minimum in these families and the bonding with the relatives are least. Such as children living in a western country with the Asian background knows much about the Christmas as compared to their traditional festival like Diwali.
In conclusion, the movement of families from one nation to another for the work purpose is beneficial mainly in terms of wealth. The cultural and traditional values are completely lost by these families, and the bonding with the relatives and love for the neighbourhood is least.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72966351826 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489051094891 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.5856128034 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.75 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277425243448 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114432846401 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799979498477 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170656074784 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941472451596 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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