Nowadays, with the advancement of technology and transportation facilities, people can work and live anywhere they want.
Discuss its advantages and disadvantages:
These days, the progressive development of internet, communication technologies and transportation facilities has profoundly influence on the way people live and work. This essay will discuss benefits and drawbacks resulting from such development before arriving at a reasonable conclusion.
There are various reasons why development in communication technology and transportation is advantageous. First of all, people just need laptop and internet connection to work from home and they don’t need to suffer commuting for long hours to go office. Using the internet, they converse with colleagues and bosses to finish their work at home. Resultantly people can spend more time with the families and friends. For instance, the concept of work from home concept has gained popularity because of advancement in the telecommunication industry. Secondly, easy transportation has made possible for people to travel even to the remote area. They can also commute to and from work quickly and be back to home quickly. For example, Mumbai locals has made possible to reach a remote area like Ghansoli which is outside of the City center. Hence technological advancement and development in transportation brings numerous benefits such as convenience and easy approach to the remote area.
On the other hand, such progression has many disadvantages. Firstly, by working at home people have no social life. They sit in their home complete their office work at home and spend time with families. Other than that they don’t have any social life, which affects their personality in the long run. Secondly, people becomes lazy as they rely on the vehicles to even nearby places. Due to this they not only becomes inactive but also invites many health issues for them. For instance, as per recent study by WHO, most of the unhealthy people falls under the category of being lazy. Hence the progression in technology and transportation attracts drawbacks such as poor health issues and underdeveloped personality.
In conclusion, I believe there are more demerits than merits of progression in technology and transportation mediums. People should use these service to a limited extend and focus more on healthy living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42196531792 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06181102596 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534682080925 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9680858214 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265974855528 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790706422881 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424294989765 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151753068077 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478118123118 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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