Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Consumer goods have taken immense importance in developing and shaping human lives currently. In this fast moving era, we cannot imagine our lifestyle without these capital goods, they are providing communication facilities, jobs, help businesses and countries to thrive economically and socially. I agree with the fact that there are more pros to this than cones.
Firstly, let me shed some light on the disadvantages of technology. Due to the innovation of technology in various sectors personal data of everyone is easily accessible; which has lead to an increase in online crimes. If we look at the data of online frauds it is increased rapidly in the recent 4 years.
On the other hand, there are uncountable benefits that humankind is enjoying due to consumer items. Different modes of communication have made personal and professional life easier. Now mostly businesses are based on technology and are fully dependent on different items like laptops, phones, cameras, infrastructure and many more; All these products help businesses to flourish globally. Manufacturing these goods requires different industries and supporting infra which creates job opportunities in many industrial sectors and help individuals to work and help his/her family to live a good life.
Additionally, there are many such goods which are part of our day to day life such as food, apparel, footwear, fuel, medicines, house, etc. All these items are essential part of individual life and without these we cannot imagine how things will work.
In conclusion, I would like to say that looking at the numerous number of facilities and opportunities that consumer products are providing worldwide; disadvantages can be considered as reasonable issues which can be solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
... to thrive economically and socially. I agree with the fact that there are more pros to this than cones....
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s lead to an increase in online crimes. If we look at the data of online frauds it...
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Line 13, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we cannot imagine how things will work. In conclusion, I would like to say that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00592472811 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5733539637 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133715913874 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461706988914 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423812977861 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666179185099 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035622248187 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.