In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home.Do you agree or disagree?
Parenting is one of the most difficult job, but with the changes in the modern lifestyle both the parents are working nowadays, and are unable to give proper time to their young kids due to which some countries are encountering youngsters dealing with many social problems. I completely agree with the given statement that working parents are lacking in giving time to their children.
Firstly, I would like to emphasize that hectic work schedules of working individuals have made their life stressful; due to which they are unable to check their kids. Choosing right friends is really important at young age as the group of friends with wrong choices can lead the child to take wrong decisions and they can get into fights and other bad habits.
Secondly, Teenage is the age where it is difficult for the one to judge what is right and what is wrong, as this is the age where child will be attracted towards drugs and other such things which can lead them to criminal offences. So, parents should help them by guiding them to make right choices.
In conclusion, I would like to say that parenting is big responsibility which builds the future of every child, so parents should try to give more time to their children and help them to make right choices, so that they can have a happy future a head.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...re unable to check their kids. Choosing right friends is really important at young ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36923013187 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8686814894 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168304407277 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816665143945 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575374469091 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982314506773 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656017178673 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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