Nowadays a gap between countryside and cities has increased in many countries. Is it the same in your country? What can governments do to reverse this?
It is an accepted fact that in their mad race to be termed modern, many poor nations have adopted such unwise policies which concentrate mainly on city areas ignoring the villages. As a result, there is a fast-widening gap between the living standards of city and village areas. The situation seems entirely the same in my country too.
The current trend in India is to make the cities as exotic as possible. Each year millions of dollars are spent on luxurious buildings, malls and restaurants to provide marvellous looks to cities. Thus, the countries are able to provide eye-catching interests to the cities.
Yet another special feature of this development is the concentration of medical, educational and employment facilities in cities. As a result, there is always a movement of rural folks to urban areas for better facilities and employment leading to the growth of slums around.
However, the government can do a lot to control this situation. First of all, the government should ensure proper education to the village people. This will enable them to have better jobs. In addition, adequate attention should be given to developing infrastructure in villages like better roads, health and educational facilities and entertainment sources like shopping centres and cinemas.
In nutshell, I would like to say that the majority of Indian people live in India. As the villages are real Indian people, they must be provided all the facilities. India lives in its villages. If steps are not taken immediately, the time is not far when the gap between the countryside and cities will become impossible to cure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, thus, as for, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16603773585 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85134232939 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2425589379 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180731234988 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546339654688 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618102522403 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816912148361 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456489184254 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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