Nowadays, individual take their families with them to abroad whenever they go on business trip. What are advantages and disadvantages of this on individual and family.
In recent times, a little fraction of the society has preferred to bring their family members on the business trips specially when they visit foreign land. In this essay we will discuss prime benefits and drawbacks of such practice.
To begin with the positives, a crucial advantage is that it allows families to spend more quality times together. Modern era is full of enhanced platforms to communicate but in most extent it miserably failed to connect, these kind of trips helps family to groom relations and understand each other. Besides creating bonding, this approach helps to cut huge financial stress over the family vacations. Generally, overseas holidays gravitate towards high expenditure and many are not fortunate to afford. As a result, many use this opportunity to use business trips as vacation for loved ones, because most part these are sponsored by the companies they work for.
Nevertheless, according to the recent studies, families most part act as an element of distraction in such trips. As the primary aim for the travel is to accomplish business goals, employees shows a behaviour of disconnection. Due to agenda for other people is to enjoy primary candidate may suffer significant loss in interest. Apart from this, they tend to create an imbalance in the work environment. On the strange lands large number of population are not familiar with the system and they constantly need attention to perform simple tasks, to contemplate the situation ones need to switch concerns swiftly as a result they become less efficient on the job.
In conclusion, although bringing relatives at business trips resulted huge increment in social life and economically beneficial, but still they seems to harm on the professional life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... extent it miserably failed to connect, these kind of trips helps family to groom relation...
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Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun use seems to be countable; consider using: 'many uses'.
Suggestion: many uses
...e not fortunate to afford. As a result, many use this opportunity to use business trips ...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...economically beneficial, but still they seems to harm on the professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19858156028 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78874050206 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.178144185 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226480638298 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702642252126 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480487008449 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128981825669 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433340452593 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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