Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that it has made him less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is no doubt that technology has made everything easier and closer, resulting world emerges as a global village but it often argues that it also provoke as introvert personalities in humans. Although there are good points supporting this notion but I believe in country.
Firstly, only from recent past, we have able to take advantages of instant messages like Emails and other social media sites before that people need to wait for days and weeks for simple replies/ messages which may build anxiety in the individuals. Addition to this, people who may not comfortable sharing their thoughts or who may not have ability to present their self to the live audience, technology provides them a state to flourish their abilities and crave new possibilities for example. Steaming sites like youtube give chance to many new talents or bloggers and writer to wider and fresh audience.
It is also true that teenagers are very fascinated to new gadgets and games, and may have chances to develop addiction for these commodities, which creates the perception that people are less enthusiastic for social activities but this persona have other sides to explore. For instance, online games have live chat system where players from all over the globe are able to interact with each other and enjoy their game. However, I am not supporting the idea of playing digital games all day because excessive usage is always bad for any being, but in the conception of developing unsocial attitude is false.
To summarize this, people may choose to indulge in less public interaction using technology, nevertheless it also support individual to flourish new possibilities for connecting all around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 115, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
... using technology, nevertheless it also support individual to flourish new possibilitie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16606498195 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6417705986 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624548736462 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2114328061 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116746387816 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459286087669 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290149958174 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685816058864 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155091527846 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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