Nowadays, it is possible to move sea creatures from their natural habitat at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people’s recreation. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
Explain your reasons and support them with specific examples.
The movement of various aquatic animals from the ocean to aquariums has been a subject of controversy. Technological advancement has made it possible to move deep sea animals from their natural abode to parks for amusement. This essay disagrees with the development and outlines why the drawbacks far outweighs the benefits.
Man is by naturally inquisitive, as such we want to know more about the creatures that live far away in the seas. Relocation allows the m to be studied and also seen at close ranges. this gives insights into their life cycle in details. The Dubai aquarium, one of the largest in the world is home to over two thousand species of aquatic animals that are viewed for pleasure by humans is a major tourist attraction in the city. Despite the attention to detail and the the care, a good number don't get to the age of full maturity before death.
On the contrary, the disadvantages of transferring sea animals from their natural setting disrupts their life. Most animals in artificial environment don't reproduce and in turn endangers such species. Statistics have revealed a sharp decline in the population of aquatic animals in recent years. Much of this has been attributed to the movement of Sea Animals from their abode to man made sites.i strongly believe that i this trend is not stopped, humans will hasten the extinction of sea creatures. while some opine that reproduction can be through artificial insemination or cloning , this however is a deviation from the original lifestyle of aquatic animals.
To sum up, the transfer of animals to tanks is detrimental to their survival. this has led to a decline in their population and will ultimately affect ecology and the food chain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76835639484 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6661202149 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229091600505 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072252449458 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722995926723 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134324250651 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649447834063 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.