Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? (61)
World is evolving every passing day. In previous times, people were used to live in their towns and cities and never imagined to get settled in any other part of the world. Thanks to technological advancement, that is emerging day by day that world has become a global village. Certainly when people starts living in other countries, other than their native places, countries will become more cosmopolitan. Everything has its merits & demerits. I shall discuss how can government ensure that multicultural people can live together in a country with peace and harmony.
To begin with, many cities have been marked as most cosmopolitan cities such as Amsterdam, Los Angles, Paris etc. Many people with different cultures and different languages have migrated from their native countries for a better life style. It is evident of the fact that these people have their own life standards, rules, living styles which may conflict with the native one's' or other people. There is a strong likelihood that these people impact city's rules & regulations. In order to maintain harmony and making everyone lives freely and enjoy their own lifestyle, Government has to intervene.
To elucidate it further, it becomes a core responsibility of Government to conduct different cultural events whereby residents can showcase their culture, get familiar with other cultures & people. In order to get mingle and settled in any country, it is also a responsibility of the citizen to adapt that city's culture and make essential amendments in his lifestyle. The one important factor, that cannot be neglected that people should not be victim of racism. Government should make strict rules in order to discourage racism and make it obligatory for native residents to get mingle for newly migrated people. In the same context, Government make sure that competent newly migrants should get deserving jobs in multinational companies, this will lead to multicultural diversity & will give opportunity to native people to get familiar with migrated people.
To recapitulate, it is not just the responsibility of the Government to ensure harmony & peace among different cultural society, but also the responsibility lies on every single individual living in that city to open arms for people who leave their native town & getting settled in a new country with a dream of a better lifestyle. At the end of the day, we are all humans, no particular sect of gender matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagined getting'.
Suggestion: imagined getting
...ive in their towns and cities and never imagined to get settled in any other part of the world....
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t be victim of racism. Government should make strict rules in order to discourage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21882951654 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83424629387 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529262086514 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9059342711 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.944444444 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338696538482 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103879308598 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902105072285 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208603689676 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821798086654 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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