Nowadays, many families migrate to other countries due to employment. Some people say it benefits the children of immigrants families. Other say it is more difficult for the children of these families. Discuss both views and give you opinion.
In recent times, many people migrate to other countries to search for better job opportunities with good compensation. It is never ending date whether immigration will have a positive impact on a child upbringing or have an adverse impact. In my opinion there are more advantages to it than disadvantages and I intent to support my views with below given arguments.
Firstly, countries like America, United Kingdom, Australia or Canada are developed with excellent education and medical benefits to children. In addition, they have well developed infrastructure, labs and libraries which are required by children to supplement and increase research knowledge, thus leading to academic achievements and eventually to accomplishing their dream jobs. Moreover, immigrants kids are well prepared to compete in the global village as they are brought up in to an environment which already constitutes of children from other nationalities
Secondly, because they will grow up being familiarized with other cultures, traditions and festivities, as a result they will be more libral and respectful to them. The rivalary and hatered which could virtually be seen around, will have a huge dip and world will be more accepting place to different cultures.
The only disadvantage to immigrant children will be to choose a culture. There parent will force them to absorb conventions and follow their code of conduct but on the other hand it would be them who would want to accept other culture. Therefore, this could turn into a stressful and obligatory situation for them.
To conclude, I would like to say that migrations of parents to other countries for well paid jobs will be a blessing and our world will be more libral in accepting other cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: consists of
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing and our world will be more libral in accepting other cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23928571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96250161457 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9296088405 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201241292943 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080433522633 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550407832802 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117828689262 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464990948393 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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