Nowadays museums and historical sites are visited mainly by foreign tourists rather than by locals. Why is this happening? What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more often?
Museums and historical sites are become the tourist attractions these days and ages. Although they have boosted the number of tourists, local numbers that visit have failed to increase. This essay will evaluate some main reasons for decreased number of local visitors and give suggestion for raising them up.
The motive of huge difference between the volumes of tourists and indigenous that attend to historical places are varied. Firstly, people that live in the neighborhood are familiar with those sites and at least once they have gone there. Therefore, the expense of the historical sites does not seem to have logical reason and going to these places would be waste of time and money owing to entrance cost. Due to that, locals prefer to allocate their education and entertainment budget on something else. Meanwhile, tourists from other places tend to pay the cost to know more about the culture when travelling to new regions. Secondly, the design of historical sites is almost unchanged through decades. Owing to this, visiting museums for dwellers of there, is obviously monotonous. However, these locations pick foreigners curiosity especially at their first trip.
Some measures can be taken to stimulate local residents to visit museums and historical sites. In one hand, these places should serve both didactic and entertainment purposes. For instance, game zones as well as historical theaters can be held on museums, to motivate locals to spend their time there. Furthermore, building some shops and restaurant in the historical places can tempt locals to come and visit. In the other hand, if the historical sites and museums renovated, not only tourists, but also local visitors will come and entertain there.
To put in a nutshell, there are two principal causes for the alleviated number of local visitors of historical sites and for sure, it is an indispensable part of their manager’s tasks to encourage local inhabitants to go such places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24921135647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68955149965 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7631437693 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340672826038 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112831962962 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797837289856 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204782557201 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675178155245 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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