Nowadays people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle Why do think this is How could this problem be solved

Essay topics:

Nowadays people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do think this is? How could this problem be solved?

Undoubtedly, the living style of people all over the world has been changed for few decades. Technological advancements and the overall economic stability plays a vital role for this change.However, mitigation is possible by government awareness programmes and imposing high tax rate for fast food and alcoholic products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...lity plays a vital role for this change.However, mitigation is possible by government a...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 41.998997996 7% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 274.0 1615.20841683 17% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 48.0 315.596192385 15% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70833333333 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.6321480259 4.20363070211 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31007510824 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 42.0 176.041082164 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.875 0.561755894193 156% => OK
syllable_count: 88.2 506.74238477 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569549382431 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040739993899 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00604762685355 0.0667982634062 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569549382431 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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