These days, with the improvement of consumer society, shopping plays an important role in people’s daily lives. As a result, in order to meet the high demand of customers, more and more stores have a tendency to extend their working hours to almost all day and even weekends. I totally believe that it is a positive phenomenon and this essay will analyze my own opinion.
Firstly, no one can deny the fact that markets which open overnight can supply people from all works of life with fresh foods and other convenient products. Particularly, in the past, it used to be difficult for staffs who worked in night shifts to purchase items for their daily livings mainly because they ended up working lately when all convenient stores closed. Therefore, with today’s flexible time for making new purchases, they no longer need to store up foods during weeks which may contain a lot of serious bacteria. Moreover, their families can also enjoy fresh foods which provide them with a large amount of nutrition and prevent them from dangerous diseases such as cancer and gastropathy.
Secondly, it is evident that the longer working time of some shops leads to the significant demand for work labor with a lot of job opportunities. Hence, a huge number of people can escape from being unemployment and get chances to alter their lives for a better with higher income. That is the reason why there are more and more students who are occupied with assignments at their universities can apply for part-time jobs at night so as to earn for their livings. Furthermore, the reduction in unemployment rate will be also accompanied by the decline of the number of criminals in our society which enable the world to beef up the economy and citizens’ lives as well.
To sum up, there is no doubt that the increase in stores which remain for all day is extremely beneficial resulting in the higher living standard as well as economic growth.
- Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community 84
- In many countries people are living in a throwaway society where things are used for a short time and thrown away What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86102719033 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59509406257 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.7044849116 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.083333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109973073501 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421236816944 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346468864457 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737843154959 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361077099107 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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