Old workers often retire at the age of 60 or 65. Some people say that workers should be allowed to work as long as they want to. What is your opinion?.
Many argue that old workers ought to be permitted to work even after reaching the retirement age of 60 or 65 years. I totally disagree with this statement and shall point out the benefits from retiring employees at the age of 60 or 65.
Firstly, retiring employee at the age of 60 benefits many organizations in different ways. To elaborate on this, as people retire at the age of 60, they provide an opportunity for younger employees to compete for that, expected to be, empty vacancy. Thus, benefit the company in terms of individual performance and productivity. In addition, although old workers have a great deal of experience in their field of work, their salaries and benefits represent a considerable amount of any company financial expenses. Companies would benefit from reallocating the financial resources to other fields that may benefit the whole company. For example, ABC Company stated that it redirected the financial resources dedicated to the recent retired employees to provide training course to all current working employees.
Secondly, retired workers are more value assets to the society after retirement. To illustrate, many companies would hire retired employees to work as consultants or trainers. By applying this approach, retired employees get the opportunity to transfer their knowledge and experience to others. For instance, Mick Coley, who retired recently, was hired by XYZ Company to conduct seminars to transfer his own knowledge and expertise to younger employees in the field of welding. So far the seminar attendance schedule is booked for the next 3 months. Furthermore, giving training sessions and seminars would provide an additional source of income to those retired workers beside their pensions.
To conclude, despite the fact that retiring workers ate the age of 60 is considered hard by some people, this action benefits organizations financially. Also, it is a proven fact that retired employees can be of more value added to the society after retirement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30721003135 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88642055665 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6040895939 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248002430796 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902391548387 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784040744202 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181923068227 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717096903131 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.