The online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities close. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, there has been mushroom growth in Internet shopping around the world. Some people argue that the traditional stores in large town will go out of business due to increased in popularity of online shops. This essay will discuss that despite of the advantages of online shopping, conventional market will still remain in business.
On the one hand, many people hold opinion that a large number of stores and markets of a town will completely substituted by online marts and shops. The mainstay of this belief is that shopping through Internet is a good alternative to traditional shopping for some consumers because of it provides facilitation and convenience. Furthermore, it saves people from lengthy commute and provides them ample opportunities to carry out leisure activities. Consequently, if majority of shoppers prefer to buy their commodities online, eventually the retailers will shut down. For instance, 95% Australian super markets are running online shops which are delivering goods at turnaround of 24 hours.
Nonetheless, these arguments do not stand up to scrutiny in my opinion. Due to obvious reasons that certain demographic of society is still apprehensive about the trend of e –shopping because of recent increase in the frauds of buying goods from different websites and internet applications. In other words, products on Internet might be vibrant and flashy although, their functionality in real is over stated in online adverts. Thus, many buyers prefer to shop from departmental stores rather than online. For example, there have been several instances recorded when buyers express their dissatisfaction on the quality of products that have been bought from online store. As a result, many consumers are still fascinated towards traditional style of shopping and consider it a pleasurable experience, as do not want to compromise for a faulty and substandard product.
In conclusion, although online shopping offers convenience and comfort, yet it cannot completely replaced the business of conventional stores because of the bolstered fears among consumers from the online fraud.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: substitute
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49544072948 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98085030449 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6942203571 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22623190442 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075912958468 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396171987985 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147043664625 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303210945134 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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