The only reason people work hard is to earn more money. There are no other reasons to do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is a universal truth that people born with the purpose and they have to work hard in order to realize those purposes they born with. However, Many adepts asserts that the only reason people work hard is to earn more money only. However, My inclination discord the statement, and can be support by the following arguments.
To commence with, it is an evident that as the world economy has grown, the standard of living has been improved a lot. Urbanization and globalization has worked as a fuel in the fire behind the increased consumerism in the human life. Now, in the competition of availing luxury to the life, many people work hard and survey depicts that the rate of people with the goal of high earning is quite a high. However, every coinage has two sides.
If we think in the broader view, we will find there are many other people who have different aims in their life rather earning money. There are many athletes and artists who work hard to earn the respect for their nation.For instance, Ms. P.V. Sindhu has out her immense efforts to earn a silver medal during the RIO olympic 2016. There are many artists like A.R. Rehman who had work hard to get recognition of our nation on world map.
Nonetheless, History of mankind can depict many examples of hard work to serve the humanity. There are many people who have stake their life behind several noble causes.To exemplify, Mahatma gandhi and other martyrs who fought hard for the freedom of India. Mother teresa who revered her work for the poor in India. There is endless list of such idols in history and many more are even existed today. One of the great example is Sri sri ravishankar who is considered as an humanitarian, spiritual leader and ambassador of peace.
By summing up all above arguments, We can say that money is the source of survival and luxury but It is considered to be slightly overrated saying that nowadays earning money is remained the only goal of people behind hard work.
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Essay evaluation report
people born with the purpose
people are born with the purpose
Many adepts asserts that
Many adopt asserts that
My inclination discord the statement
My inclination discords the statement
can be support by the following arguments.
can be supported by the following arguments.
is quite a high.
is quite high.
flaws:
'Nonetheless, ' is not used correctly. When 'Nonetheless' or 'However' or 'On the contrary' or 'but' is used in the beginning of a paragraph, it means the content of the paragraph will be opposite to the previous paragraphs. but the fourth paragraph in this essay is close to the third paragraph, they are not opposite . So the correct location to put 'Nonetheless, ' is at the beginning of the third paragraph.
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2 //Double check grammar issues after essay writing.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1581 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.517 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.275 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.957 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.582 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... worked as a fuel in the fire behind the increased consumerism in the human life....
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...rd to earn the respect for their nation.For instance, Ms. P.V. Sindhu has out her i...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'staked'.
Suggestion: staked
...umanity. There are many people who have stake their life behind several noble causes....
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... their life behind several noble causes.To exemplify, Mahatma gandhi and other mar...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for the freedom of India. Mother teresa who revered her work for the poor in Ind...
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Line 7, column 431, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Sri
...sted today. One of the great example is Sri sri ravishankar who is considered as an hum...
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Line 7, column 472, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ri sri ravishankar who is considered as an humanitarian, spiritual leader and amba...
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oney is remained the only goal of people behind hard work.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265789473684 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.160526315789 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0947368421053 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0421052631579 0.0501214627716 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0368421052632 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118421052632 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0421052631579 0.0403226058552 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36998247899 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0326793684256 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00526315789474 0.00163938923432 321% => OK
Determiners: 0.0868421052632 0.0861772015684 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0105263157895 0.021408717616 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0210526315789 0.011925033212 177% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1982.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 348.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69540229885 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313218390805 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204022988506 0.28420135186 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114942528736 0.203846283523 56% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0747126436782 0.137316102897 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36998247899 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 57.5464107941 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3333333333 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4716289541 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.111111111 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.814263465372 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.7356321839 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.78021978022 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335325700303 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0966855851875 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693168977697 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537067630327 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180768754 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135279020037 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898496883156 0.0742795772207 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330313832668 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0596045567143 0.0638462369009 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235651020273 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577271887039 0.058150111329 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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