The only successful person is someone who makes large amounts of money. Do you agree with that opinion, or not? use specific reasons and examples to support your view.
It can be seen that money is one indicator of who is successful or not in their life. An elaborate for this statement now every person is known for their status symbols. status symbols are based on the equation but now it has happened with all that success is equal to money. now all people think that money is all this for everyone. we must have any substitute something else for 'money' because then the picture looks different. I completely disagree with this money.
To begin with, now money is one indicator of successful, but it is not because knowledge is more important than money. money is come and go but knowledge is always with you. some rich family thinks that they have lots of money so they do anything in their life. For example, Shakespeare has said one nice thing that after money is gone no one realising that person; but word always realised a knowledgeable person like Albert Einstein, Chanakya or lots of people. One famous writer asks that 'one wipe your money but never wipe your wealth of knowledge.'
Furthermore, happiness is always defined with a happy family, not for lots of money or huge assets. all people often see that the middel class is live in a small house like a tiny house or studio apartment in a modest building on only a few dollars a day. they have zillions problem with almost everything in their day to day life but they live happily with their family on the flip side rich people are not so close enough with the other member of the family, for an instance, one wealthy society survey shows that low and middle close as compare to upper-class.
To sum up, this thing always happened with all that money is not everything for us. family and other things are equally important for us, money is one step so we can reach at all the materialise things but money is not a final step of our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Status
...rson is known for their status symbols. status symbols are based on the equation but n...
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Suggestion: Now
...ith all that success is equal to money. now all people think that money is all this...
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Suggestion: We
...nk that money is all this for everyone. we must have any substitute something else...
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Suggestion: Money
...knowledge is more important than money. money is come and go but knowledge is always ...
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Suggestion: Some
...nd go but knowledge is always with you. some rich family thinks that they have lots ...
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Suggestion: All
..., not for lots of money or huge assets. all people often see that the middel class ...
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Suggestion: They
...t building on only a few dollars a day. they have zillions problem with almost every...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oney is one step so we can reach at all the materialise things but money is not a final step of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52694610778 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31847132001 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2863467231 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163018888789 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705576168117 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358902521777 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103023912395 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382533219455 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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