Some people consider thinking about and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue that people should simply live in the moment.
Do you agree or disagree? Use at least one personal example in your response.
Give reasons for your answer.
Planning and preparing for the future is one of the most important Thing on human phycology. all have been taught how to plan for the future in all business schools across the world. however, I believe that we need to learn to stay in the present.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why I believe that living, firstly, living in the moment is absolutely stress and tension free. those who live in the living in the present can enjoy and experience the moment so well that they are attuned to the right flow in their life and such flow in their life and such flow almost always leads them to the right future the fullest, but we keep planing for the future, which brings insecurity, stress and fear in all of us.
Finally, living in the present always makes people accept things as they are. such acceptance in essential we need a happy anb healthy life. I have experienced that constant endeavour to plan for the future creates a feeling.
on the other hand, safeguarding the future is a nation that is widely accepted across the globe. I personally see nothing wrong with it.
conclusively, I firmly believe that having a future strategy is not bad, but even to live up to that proposed projection, we must live in the present thus I agree that living at the moment is the best way of living one's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: All
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Suggestion: However
... all business schools across the world. however, I believe that we need to learn to sta...
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Suggestion: at the moment
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Suggestion: stressed
...tly, living in the moment is absolutely stress and tension free. those who live in the...
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Suggestion: Such
...makes people accept things as they are. such acceptance in essential we need a happy...
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...an for the future creates a feeling. on the other hand, safeguarding the future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34744255469 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4273283736 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2727272727 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204502361646 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752235716803 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513168674595 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110720461856 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366635067035 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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