Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, many parents spend a lot of money on purchasing different toys to fulfil their child's education and entertainment needs. According to an official survey, children's educational toys can allow their mind development to be effective and faster. this statement also has pros and coins. the following paragraph shows the pros and cons apparently.
To begin with, most parents think that if we buy a lot of toys for children will be more intelligent. Also if we provide a number of toys it will be a benefit for their psychology because nowadays all toys company designed their toys according to child choose it will be more colourful and attractive. it will be helpful to encourage their mental as well as psychological skills. For an instance, games like chase it helps to increase a child's mental skills and also kids use their brain in different ways the other example is a game sneak &lader it also helps to increase a sense of numbers and colours. modern toys also find a more effectively designed for education purpose.
on the other side, some people think that it is only one side of the coin because if we buy lots of toys so it may be spoil child's future and child become more greedy to buy another toy. For instance, many parents spoil their children by purchasing every toy the children want. Afterwards, those children will have a strong desire to acquire more toys. also now the price of toys are also very high so it requires plenty of money and also a waste of money. if parents give everything to their child so they never know the value of money. furthermore, it creates a negative effect on their education. it may spoil their education and also it will be a risk for their future.
In conclusion, toys play an important role in helping a child's growth but too many toys affect children's psychological development negatively. Thus parents should lead them in a proper way and purchase a reasonable number of toys that they would feel right for their children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75722543353 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.616844149 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50289017341 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1962814028 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294804279199 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102949714319 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686027315116 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201284478205 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547026133843 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.