Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV or reading about them in the newspapers.
What is the reason for this?
Is it a good idea to copy famous personalities?
Give reasons for your answers along with relevant examples from your experience and knowledge.
Inspiration has been an essential key to admire and being motivated. The public tends to admire celebrities, mostly who are appearing either in Television or by reading from newspapers. There are several reasons and aspects to get inspired.
Starting with Television personality, besides Politicians, people mostly got attracted to actors and actresses, who work in movies or series. Everyone has a dream in life which some way or other they can not able to achieve yet. These famous people, however, have all the stardom which ordinary people keep dreaming of and they are convinced that the same can be accomplished by following the lifestyle as their favourite character does.
Next coming to most famous guys, who are depicted on the front page of the newspaper, mostly are a wealthy businessman. They have all the luxuries: royalties, house, and vehicle, which a poor can't dream of. Hence admiring and watching their status is the only pleasure they can accumulate.
However, sometimes, following celebrities and dressing like them or imbibing their body language provides superiority to an ordinary people among others and they get instant gratifications, which eventually, leads to a better life and a better desire to enjoy luxury life and keep motivated for their next level success; an ordinary people stand one step closer to their famous personalities.
To sum up, yes it is a good idea for people to copy their favourite character, in order to feel gratification and to get a motivation to keep growing in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tends to admire celebrities, mostly who are appearing either in Television or by reading from...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lties, house, and vehicle, which a poor cant dream of. Hence admiring and watching t...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nd vehicle, which a poor cant dream of. Hence admiring and watching their status is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.172 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86082785221 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.1769689638 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.545454545 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141073874301 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464453220216 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421355686001 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778242763857 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346612842836 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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