In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today with various sources of information available to students, teachers have no role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modernisation era, Technology revolutionised the human existence. Indeed, technology is prevailing all over the world and human use it every sphere of life such as in education, business etcetera. With the advent of it, there are various sources are available from where this to students acquire the information. Some people asserts that with the arrival of various sources of information, there is no need of a teacher in the modern education, while others are condemnd about the statement. I agree with the latter statement which I will portray in the following segments.
There are umpteen reasons which are propitious to my viewpoint. The predominant reason is, teachers are the indispensable part of the education. Indeed, teachers are the torchbearers and role model for their pupils. Perhaps, with the advent of Internet, students can acquire the knowledge from it but somethings are still there that are not contained in Internet, which are only given by teachers. Furthermore, teachers have experience in teaching, they taugh children with their profound knowledge which they got from their experience. There encourage and motivate them about their goals and there is a big hand of teachers in cultivating the child.
Leaping further, Although, students can get information from Internet but still there is the dire need of instructor who can examine them every time and secure them from astray.Because there are many prone sites ,which are prevailing on the Internet, which can affect the pupils mind and hinder them from persueing their study with concentration. Due to these pronological sites, the aftermath will detrimental, which will perhaps ruined the carrier of the learner. Hence, mentors are essential.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I deem that mentor are the imperative part of education without them student can not able to show their superiority in the world. Moreover, I cogitate that, teachers give knowledge to learners as well as moral and ethic values that can help them in acquiring success in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22848664688 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8620420321 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2989384302 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180222092857 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634716562555 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688858516929 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10645493372 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804840446526 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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