You are working for a company. Your computer is giving some problem and it is affecting your work. Write a letter to the manager in your letter.
-Describe the problem
-explain how it is affecting your work
-write what you want him to regarding it
Dear Sir
I am employer at your company. I am writing this letter to inform you about some problem in computer and it is affecting in my work.
Today, when I come at office and go to my cabin, starts the computer but the computer have taken to start in five minutes and then the functions of computer is not working properly due to the virus and it is affecting in my work I was getting late for my daily work and my day work is not completed on time.
I would be very grateful if you solve this problem so that I was doing work in proper time there was no a big problem in computer if you are concerned with computer technician. So that problem is solved in some few hours.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully 17th febraury 2018
Raman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblem in computer and it is affecting in my work. Today, when I come at office...
^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...was doing work in proper time there was no a big problem in computer if you are co...
^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are concerned with computer technician. So that problem is solved in some few hours. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cerned with computer technician. So that problem is solved in some few hours. ...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours faithfully 17th febraury 2018 Raman
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 628.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30136986301 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29242390408 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.3020772756 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398627314801 0.216113520407 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166487534494 0.0766984524023 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980855963537 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201217942065 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129628277824 0.0580467560999 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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