In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
In the modern times, the issue of teleworking has become highly controversial. They are those who say that teleworking has a lot of advantages, however other believe that overall it is determined bring many disadvantages. In this essay I will examine the positive and drawbacks of this argument and provide my overall opinion.
From overall perspective, there are two key advantages of working from home. Perhaps the main advantage of teleworking is that reduce travel cost and air pollution. Working from home and internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other, which may lead to reduce travel cost. Less commuting to the workplace lead to reduce traffic congestion, which is one of the main cause of air pollution. A further point in favour of teleworking is that people have less stress. Stress of commuting in traffic at rush hour in big cities is extremely, other stresses can include unfriendly coworker, inconvenient work environment. As a result, working from home in their own environment at peace without any stresses or distraction lead to more productivity.
Despite these argument, there are also various disadvantages of working from home. The main disadvantage is that people easy fell loneliness and isolation. The workplace provides a location to meet people and make friends, however teleworking makes it difficult to get coworker and keep in touch with them.
In conclusion, it must be said that teleworking has clear advantages and disadvantages. Taking the above account, it would appear that there are more advantages than disadvantages between working from home or not. If we can find right balance between them, then working from home will increase quality of our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31899641577 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9386965409 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.544193592 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296787482825 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943711533785 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748926700943 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162679864729 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790306524795 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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