Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our
environment. What causes global warming? What solutions
are there to this problem?
One of the most topical issues in modern society is warming of global. This has caused the threat to our municipalities and city dweller. This essay will discuss the reason why global warming is occurring and offer some measures to tackle this issue.
General speaking, there are two main issues which are caused global warming. Firstly, it is a well-known fact that cutting and clearing tree in the forest are over increasing. the result of this is that less trees will absorb carbon dioxide from the air and release oxygen back into it. Secondly, it has been proven that animals, particularly livestock like sheep and cattle, produce methane, a greenhouse gas. The more livestock are grazed in the large-scale, the more methane the amount of methane produced a big contributor to global warming.
Despite these challenges, there are a variety of ways to resolve this issues. Firstly, government should encourage people plant more trees through reforestation. The more trees are grown, the more oxygen will be released to the environment. Secondly, farmers should use different livestock feeds instead of grazing. The result of this is that the amount of methane will cut.
In conclusion, global warming is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I feel that the best way to solve this issue is by encouraging people know that the global is warming. If the people have a good knowledge about global warming, the problems cause by it could be solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
...tree in the forest are over increasing. the result of this is that less trees will ...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun trees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...zed in the large-scale, the more methane the amount of methane produced a big co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... methane the amount of methane produced a big contributor to global warming. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07346938776 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60216806412 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7118019462 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6875 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256132374035 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845119793605 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810671011323 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175826154894 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12398258231 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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