In the past, people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture. These days, most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Fashion has changed the wardrobes all around the world. Earlier people use to wear the clothes as per the religious beliefs and customs. Nowadays, pattern of wearing clothes globally attained uniformity and in my view it is constructive growth.
First of all, this has a great advantage as whole industry will wear same dresses. This will make the clothing affordable as manufacturer can make the stuff in bulk hence, it will literally cut down the cost. For the instance, brand like Levis are well renowned garment industry which make jean and shirts in bulk and later then sell them on lower price. On contrast if the industry has to produce less then its cost will automatically increase.
Apart from this, these clothes can be worn in the office as ethnic wear cannot be wear in certain works such as mines, agriculture so on. For this we can take the example of Indian ethnic wear such as saree or dhoti kurta cannot be worn in factories.
Moreover, this will lead to uniformity at global level and decrease the discrimination among the people in the different industries in the different countries. To illustrate, China, Japan, America, Pakistan or India either developed or under developing countries people use to wear shirts and trousers in the offices during the office hours. Hence we can easily say it help to promote equality and uniformity.
To conclude, I firmly believe that similar pattern of clothing is a positive development as it will not only help the individual to enhance there personality but also make the nation equal on the global level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, as to, in fact, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9320754717 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61565786626 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1184527134 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179465407657 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611395153578 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511339305362 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101807005965 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321654474776 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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