In the past, when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country.Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
Do the advantages of this development outgweighs the disadvantages ?
There are many benefits of attending universities in overseas instead of in home country, although if we critically examine this development, we may unfold a few side problems.
Many people are concerned that foreign education's expenses, whether these be tution, accommodation or flight fees, usually amount to a huge cost for one international student -- and that about five local university students could benefit from such finance. There is also the concern of safety of international students as abroad countries may slide into chaos. These issues eventually put studying abroad at a disadvantage.
However, studying in overseas universities has some major advantages that would benefit students and societies in general, so much that the minor effects of huge expenses and security would be almost unnoticed. For one, international students stand a good chance of developing problem-solving skills as they tend to become independent when they are in foreign lands. The experience of learning how to interact with people from different races and cultures, managing situations and simply knowing when to choose between right and wrong oftentimes without parental guidance usually is gained during International schooling. For another, advanced equipment, modern technology and technical teaching methods, which are proven to help students' comprehensive understanding of information as well as its practical application, are not uncommon in foreign schools. If more students are exposed to these, then there may be a better future for both individuals and society. On the social side, the unity, love and cordial relationship among countries may be strengthened since various languages, cultures and customs are being learnt and understood by students from a variety of background. A task that may otherwise be somewhat unachievable should students study in their home countries. Finally, students who study abroad are often opportuned to work in large companies because many of the world's leading organisations usually have major branches in foreign countries and they sometimes recruit graduates of foreign institutions.
It would then seem that students are making informed decisions of travelling to foreign lands in order to acquire their university degrees
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, then, well, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70294117647 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.040864828 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5693975548 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.153846154 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256554073899 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885758429587 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560577424591 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127764048277 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714095074568 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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