People are never satisfied with what they have;they always want something more or something different.use specific reasons and examples.do you agree or disagree.
It is often said that desires never ends and people keep on wishing something which they do not possess. There are very few people who are content with what they have otherwise most are in race of procure or achieve something. I strongly believe that human being has tendency to get bored and look out for other things.
First of all, basic habit of human is to explore the surrounding and beyond that the world which is unlimited to seek. People keep on getting new things and set out for another search which gives them a sense of doing and on achieving, a pride of achievement. This exploration almost applies in each and every field where human is associated with. For instance, medical scientists never get satisfied with new innovation in their field and always turn up for another research and such inquisitiveness gave so many modern techniques and medicines to the world. Nowadays, every year new technology in mobile and communication field is being launched and I certainly say such are the result of being discontent with what is already there.
Secondly, the need of the humans is changed periodically and brings dis-satisfaction in the life which enabled to change the status quo. It is generally talked that requirement is the mother of inventions and change. In every walk of the life, changes can be seen and some creates the challenges for existing arrangements. For instance, I had bike when I was studying in class 8th and my hometown whole area was 5 sq km. However, I had to buy the car for commuting to work after 10 years as city spread abnormally in size. Another reason is marketing of the companies which influence the people to aspire for new items. This trend can be seen in cities where consumers spending grew 10% higher than other cities.
To conclude, though satisfaction is best tool to live the life peacefully, innovation and inventions can be only be done when people start to be discontent with what they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...cal scientists never get satisfied with new innovation in their field and always turn up for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78106508876 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68356079621 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5562494657 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162598444666 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509006370723 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710778641144 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118869958871 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832208314887 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.