People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Write at least 250 words
A vast multitude of the society understands the significance of education these days. This is driving young ones to attend schools and colleges. Though reasons may vary, I think striving to have better career prospects and thirst for knowledge and new experiences are few major factors for this trend.
It is very evident that the job market, in most major fields whether technological or medical or marketing, prefers individuals with higher level of education. Also, graduates with a Master’s equivalent program, comparatively, have an advantage of being recruited at campus selections and offered the chances of taking up research fellowships. A recent survey indicates that most of the global leaders at leading multinational companies in the world are graduates from universities. It would be, therefore, apt to say that better education implies better opportunities.
Some people crave for the university tag for leveraging their status in the society. There are, of course, a significant others who follow the herd. Either which way, both in the former and the latter case, students have little gumption about the wide array of benefits they could derive in the long run by educating in the university.
It is, nevertheless, an indisputable fact that university education certainly creates scope for the students to explore new advancements in their particular field of study and research. Additionally, their skills are honed and nurtured under the combined guidance of research scholars and well reputed professors; a vital aspect, which the dropouts and individuals who get into Job cycle with basic education miss out up on. A very categorical point to note is that, Universities, akin to The University of Cambridge and The Harvard University, which are considered to premium schools in the world offer fellowship to the students who excel and award them doctorates for their contribution to not just academics but also to the progress of the nation. Consider for instance the broad spectrum of development in space research, medical treatment and equipment, IT solutions, insurance, logistics, and so on.
To summarize, students are more than willing to take up tertiary education to conduct research, to acquire in-depth concepts and to experience field specific evolution. This in view, the reasons for taking up higher education while are many, career improvement and knowledge acquisition are the vital aspects influencing people to attend universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'other'?
Suggestion: other
...ty. There are, of course, a significant others who follow the herd. Either which way, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48831168831 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04333795138 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4648056397 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0625 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174522396231 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575375780362 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816694317588 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104310871976 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593001951178 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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