people attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new expeiences, career prepaation, increased knowledge etc.). why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
it is believed that people have lived a lot of good experience when they are at University and they can get a good job from this kind of community especially university. therefore, people prefer to go to university for getting good future and then they can meet a lot of new friends in there. Maybe, they can find their wife/husband when they are studying at university. In my opinion, all people have to go to university for themselves and their families. For example, there are lots of jobless people in my country. because of this reason everybody need improve themselves for finding good job.
first of all, people can be careful when they choose their department at university. moreover, they need discover themselves for choosing their department. because it can not be suitable for them and then they can not be happy to work at this department and it is not good for their life. İf they realize their abilities, they can find their department easily. Hence, they like their future job and can reach maximum level in this job. While they are working on this job, they can be so happy and their families are effected to be happy in a sort of way.
Secondly, people can get lots of friend in their life. they can be changed their idea by them and they can realize other side of life. moreover, they can gain more object from them and can learn lots of thing from them. However, they can care about their friends. when they get first impressions from them, they can not know any information about them. Although their friends can be bad, people can get good things from this kind of mistakes. it means that people who go to the university can try everything such as preparation of real life. so university is kind of training room for people. İf people do not go to university, they can do some mistakes in their real life and they can not come back from this mistake.
To sum up, people have to go to university and get university degree for their life. they can produce some solutions that can be useful for them and they need try in their university life for not doing mistake in real life. therefore, almost people need go to university and they realize how it is important for them. people who are educated can find true way easily and then they can achieve their target easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, kind of, sort of, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 7.85571142285 369% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 24.0651302605 291% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58009708738 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37908035368 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.385922330097 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0366940267 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.48 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.48 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140687689079 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759173812175 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706776365337 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130109557914 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705168891548 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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