People in the current generation are not fit and active, and it will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue.
Way of living changed these days, people are always busy, daily basis increased, where this leads to lack in active. That’s why this generation is facing several health problems and diseases, due to many causes that approaching to these issues, and there must be solutions to assist and educate people for its side effects.
On one hand, people life is hard, it kept them away from being healthy and active, because of many reasons. First, these days life requires a lot from man/woman, especially towards their home, they work extra hours to satisfy their family needs and forget about their health. Second, workload causes stress, addition to traffic congestion while travelling to work, this will lead to lack of time, where they can’t exercise and release this stress at the gym or doing any sports. For example, I am one of this generation, where I spend most of my time at work and on the road driving, I came late home and turned to be lazy where I won’t do anything except sleeping or watching movies.
On the other hand, people can avoid this health problems, by finding solutions or alternative things, that assist to pass this situation. First, humans should schedule their time between work, family and exercising, in order to release the stress that is affecting negatively on their attitude between their families, friends or work teammates. Second, each workplace, should have a gym area or offer activities membership for its employees, to stay active and avoid any health problem, due to obesity by being inactive or work stress. For example, one of my previous work companies, we used to have daily free access to they gym and one physiotherapy session per week, this helped us to stay active and give more to our job.
In conclusion, man/woman are facing several health problems, that is keeping them not fit, and the main reasons are workload and time. Therefore, we should arrange and give ourselves more time, by caring about our health, to stay in good shape and free of any disease or health problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
..., because of many reasons. First, these days life requires a lot from man/woman, esp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94797687861 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45338273387 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563583815029 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8874978821 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.666666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239509893254 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933430224572 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651463698676 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157000424347 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589336538189 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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