people do not have such close relation with their neighbour as they did in the past ,why is this so and what can he done to improve contact between neighbour
neighbour play indispensable role in people's life that can not turn blind eye to its importance, it is a irrefutable to say that close relationship with their neighbour has been changed in current day then period of time and if the some strict plans are not formulated , relationship of neighbours can be suffered.
The formost factor to note is that in present pragmatic scenario people have a maniea of making money that makes people greedy and unintentionally they chasing the money because of inflation . but , gonne are the days when people behave with their neighbour like they are their family ,while in current days people do not give much attention as gave in a past . consequently ,they cannot spend time with their family and also their neighbours even they do not know about their next door .Moreover, technology has the second main causes of gap between neighbours as people are lover of the new gadgets, that spend maximum time on such things for example young generation become a victim of technology they play games watch movies and majority of time they live at their home, in term of they become introvert.
However , every lock has a keys so this problem also have a solution . firstly people should give attention to relationship even it's a relation ship of their neighbour and know about the value of relation as a neighbour is the second home , those are stand by us in the critical situation.Not only this but also, people ought to become socialize and need to learn about how to mingle with each other and also spend more and more time with their neighbours so that they get socialize and share their feelings , emotions. Hence , it is essential to individual should improve the relation of neighbours and treat well and give respect to them.
To conclude, it is restated that a greed of money and technology both are main causes of gap between neighbours.However, people have to need get together and spend time with them so that it become healthy relations .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85840707965 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69035063734 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.47003409 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.875 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.375 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.125 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415662729969 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176732785102 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627919670578 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237956339801 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654009001184 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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