: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
It is precisely said that learning acquisition is a complex process. A few people tend to think that children should be encouraged to learn new language in high school rather than keeping it for latter m. I too, believe that merits of this notion outnumbered its demerits.
to embark on, in the justification of my statement. Childre are notorious and furious they adapt the things easily than adults. At young age child is less egoistic and least bothered about what others think. Moreover it is well written by David Henry that failures are the pillar of success. So there are numerous positive points to initate learning something at school. Furthermore in this mad race to fly abroad it is imperative to have possession of linguistic skill, as it brims a child to be mervelloualy intelligent and flourished, which add one more feather in thier cap.
However, it is truly said, no rose without throne. Temptation to learn a language can effect psychological health. As they already occupied with their school work, adding new brings pressure to a tinder bud. Indulging a child to a complicated instructions consume their leisure time which can latter leads to isolation as well as distant a child from their loved onces.
To conclude, there are enurmerous plate form of opportunities, if child is exposed to learn a second language at very young age. However it can also effect mental health and can shut down and do a parmanent damage.
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. 56
- Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 61
- : Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? 56
- government shiuld spend money on railways than roadso what extend do you agree or disagree 60
- people do not have such close relation with their neighbour as they did in the past ,why is this so and what can he done to improve contact between neighbour 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93852459016 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76690948435 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659836065574 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6492672856 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208869223488 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604810650087 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657712737649 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125822286066 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833331010889 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.